For my narrative, I want to explore the idea of being crushed and the energy that is pushed into a hole can give you when trying to fight back. The evolutions of the can be crushed over time and me in a random steam tower in my hometown. I want to add hands balling up and eyes that are wide open.
Whoa! This is so sick. I love the depth of the black hole, its a really interesting illusion. I love the curvy lines in the background.
ReplyDeleteCool stuff! Like Luci said, that black hole is a cool illusion. I like the idea of the energy radiating out of the black hole, some great visual narrative aspects there!
ReplyDeleteI like the idea a lot!! It actually helped me get a jump on my project! Your idea is so unique, and I really like the way you're using specific items like the can to symbolize a feeling, etc.
ReplyDeleteThe patterns that you are playing with, within this piece are really interesting and almost draw you into that black hole. I love how well everything is blending so far and there's some nice contrast in the super colorful pastels and the dark shadows.
ReplyDeleteVery techy. I like the lines but they remind me of thumbprints. It's a cool effect, but can draw attention away from everything else. The colors are also light and airy, so maybe try finding colors that are more crushing and pressing. I don't know, it just gives off a very light and airy feeling.
ReplyDeleteHi, Abigail. I really like your concept. This feeling is familiar. I think the figure looking up into the chaos really implies the feeling of being stuck. I think how you've subdued the winding lines in the second image is a bit more effective. They're still there, just not as dominant.
ReplyDelete